Page 62: Chapter 1 End

May 17th, 2011, 9:09 am

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newyorkdefendertalon, May 17th, 2011, 9:09 am     Reply


The end of a chapter, there should be some things said about this whole thing, but I guess I’ll save it for the stuff in between the chapters themselves. I didn’t really intend for this chapter to be so long winded or really take over an entire year to get through. But there you have it, the end of chapter 1. The following chapter really should not be as long.

Response to last week’s comments:

Lady Darkrina: I think out of most of the Pokémon that I can select, that Navarro would be more like a Cyndaquil, odd an inadequate at first but slowly growing up to become more powerful.

Godmoderncommander: Lols, I’m sure Ash would have preserved that mentality of fighting others with his fists if he didn’t pick his first fight with James XD

Mini987: Homerun baby! Now time to round the bases!~

Echocave: It was super effective.

Foxblaze: Pfff, surprise butt secks XD Oh you.

Shiay: Pfff, that’s okay, I thought it a bit neater for the fumes of smokescreen to billow out his nose, I always thought it was kind of neat when smokers did that… oh yeah, mandatory message: Don’t smoke kids, all drugs are bad :B

Sparky The Fox: Navarro? Bad ass? I guess even he has his moments XD

Ashy: I think this was a gratifying moment for all XD

PlayTheGameWithBacon: Clyde never saw it coming ;3

Story Teller, Astralle: ‘S all gravy, I call everyone dude, regardless of their gender XD Ah, the fun of smacking people around with a baseball bat :B

VibeCatcher: Cheating begets cheating XD He could have taken the high road, but hell, growing up in a house full of other siblings, you’re not going to want to play nice after a while.

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Darkblane257, May 17th, 2011, 2:08 pm     Reply


Yes they are free! Keep up a great work newyorkdefendertalon. :)

Story teller, Astralle, May 17th, 2011, 2:21 pm     Reply


Good, if Suicune wasn't freed than I would've hit something.

mini987, May 17th, 2011, 4:24 pm     Reply


yeah there free!!!

Foxblaze, May 17th, 2011, 4:53 pm     Reply


^^ it had to be said.

Ashy, May 18th, 2011, 7:17 am     Reply


Great work on the chapter so far, I really liked the way it ended. Keep up the good work mate ^^

CelticMagician, May 18th, 2011, 11:16 am     Reply


Congrats on the completion of Chapter 1! 8D I thoroughly enjoyed it. <3 Can't wait to see what you have in store for us in Chapter 2!

Marky Vigoroth, May 19th, 2011, 5:57 am     Reply


Welcome! I came from deviantArt.

First, I would like to say that I had been reading your comic for quite a bit of time (around the time the Mightyena was fighting the Entei). I always enjoyed not only the features of your art, but also your interpretations on the Pokemon themselves! I have problems picking favourites!

Now that is said, I do want to note one or two odd things about his Mightyena. When the Mightena debuted, the hair on top of the Mighyena's head was smooth. However, when Entei attacked Mightyena, the Mightyena's hair resulted in sticking upwards some. I thought that this was just due to the the Mightyena getting worked up due to the battle, but, apparently, Mightyena's new hair is here to stay. No; I actually like Mightyena's hair either way. I just would like you to explain this to me.

While I am at this, I also would like you to clarify something else: did Entei's bite attack also leave a scar (or we just can not see that due to Mightyena always facing to the right?

Once again, I am not nit-picking. I just would like you to clarify these two points for me. Thank you for making this comic for us! Your Pokemon designs would be a real treat to us!

VibeCatcher, May 22nd, 2011, 1:22 am     Reply


just wanna say this , regaring my last comment:

(ahem) HOW THE HELL'D I REMEMBER SUICUNE WAS IN THE MIDDLE OF THIS?

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